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Click hereShe cried out and lifted herself to meet him, her hands round the back of his neck clasping him, "Ooohhh, yes, ahhhhh, yes, sweetie. I want it good. I want to be fucked." She squealed as he moved faster, pounding at her vigorously and hammering her hole. At High School she had hardly been fucked and never by a well-hung jock; screwing her formerly shy son showed her what she had missed. However whilst it was too late for her to go back to school she could certainly enjoy the here and now and she screamed loudly, "Aaaahhh. Ahhhh. Fuck me sweetie."
"Uh, uh, uh, shit yes. This is amazing, you're fucking hot," Pete swore as he pounded her and Angela felt no need to tell him off for his language. She gripped him harder and shuddered as another blast of joy arced through her cunt. He grunted and thrust at her, "Uh, uh, you're the fucking greatest cheerleader in town, you're shitting hot."
"Aaaahh, and you're my stud. Fuck me my studly son, fuck my cougar cheerleader cunt," Angela's back bent again and her naked titties pressed at her son, the nipples hard and erect like party hats, the flesh behind them soft and supple like dough. Her cunt was soaking and awash with pleasure, cum slurping and sliding round her son's dick as it entered in and out of her. She squealed again, "Oooohh, aaaahhh, baby, fuck..."
He groaned and went faster, thrusting himself ball deep into her. His face contorted with pleasure and he gasped, "I'm gonna cum."
Aware they had no protection and she wasn't on the pill Angela thought fast, "Cum over my face and tits," she squealed.
Pete grabbed his dick out and knelt up on his knees jacking hard at it for a few seconds until it spewed cum. The white seed blasted out of it, over her face and titties and belly, covering them all with strand after strand off white goo. And her cheerleader vest as well, it was blasted and matted with salty sperm, the liquid pooling in clumps and seeping through, leaving it cum soaked.
"Shit that was great," said Pete.
"Yes," giggled his Mom in agreement.
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You're both exactly right, the sex is too fast and there are a lot of mistakes in wording, but IMHO the bones of the story and the characterization that we're given is really hot. I think that with a little revision and the right expansion, this could become a really good long short story, or even novella.
The story premise was very good. But the sex was too fast and needed a bridge to make that huge leap. I would have suggested the moms took their sons measurements once the practices became regular... to check and track their progress ... biceps, chest, waist, calves, thighs, etc. Then have the mom's help with their sons sit-ups by sitting on their ankles and counting how many reps were completed on a daily basis. Close proximity like that would help this story and make it more plausible. The virgin boy seemed to have all the right moves. Let his loving and proud mom teach him.
5 stars but I smiled when wrote locust position. You could be right but I think its lotus position.
But it's just a pity that she had zero interest in her son until he became a jock. How shallow is that. And also I didn't like how, when she was having sex with her son for the first time, she was just thinking about all the cock she missed out on in highschool, with a mental "OH well, I'll just make do with my son".
Having said that, this was enjoyable, but I am wary of read subsequent chapters that will no doubt be full of swapping and gangbang in the moms. I know that readers that see moms as nothing but fuck holes enjoy that, but it erases any intimacy and love between the mom and son characters, cheapening what they have down to just another fuck where everyone and his dog gets a go.
We need more chapters.... please 5 stars. More chapters