All Comments on 'Count Down To Moonlight Ch. 02'

Im looking forward to the next chapter!!!!

Very interesting cant wait 2 c wat happens next

More please

loving this story so far! hope to see more chapters soon

Looking forward to the explanation of where the chain came from. Nice little tie in at the end with them being"attached by more than a chain." I definately think he has her attention. Neither seems too rushed to leave the other's company. It will be interesting to see how he aproaches the situation now that he recognizes her as his mate.

I love how you can feel the electricity between these two. I love the imagery of his wolf being in a cage in his head. The picture you draw of the wolf trying to bust out. Can't wait to see what happens!

please try to make chapters longer. if a long wait

You have to write longer chapters or more chapters...

Total cockblocking by the intruders :P

okay... reading next chapter.....now!

Great, but too short.

So, why didn't they just try shouting for help, rather than waiting? The story idea is good, but you have a few plot holes that need to be fixed.

I am just realizing how appealing weres are to me. Like really a mouth watering kind of thing and I'm really liking it. Their first joust was a juicy,albeit interrupted, interaction and I can't wait to read on. Why do women fear their inner alpha bitch? I say embrace her and make him howl for glory and god!!

Keep it up like how I am right now....