by fairydust22
I am just realizing how appealing weres are to me. Like really a mouth watering kind of thing and I'm really liking it. Their first joust was a juicy,albeit interrupted, interaction and I can't wait to read on. Why do women fear their inner alpha bitch? I say embrace her and make him howl for glory and god!!
So, why didn't they just try shouting for help, rather than waiting? The story idea is good, but you have a few plot holes that need to be fixed.
Total cockblocking by the intruders :P
okay... reading next chapter.....now!
I love how you can feel the electricity between these two. I love the imagery of his wolf being in a cage in his head. The picture you draw of the wolf trying to bust out. Can't wait to see what happens!
Looking forward to the explanation of where the chain came from. Nice little tie in at the end with them being"attached by more than a chain." I definately think he has her attention. Neither seems too rushed to leave the other's company. It will be interesting to see how he aproaches the situation now that he recognizes her as his mate.