All Comments on 'Country Girl'

I loved the story...until the part about Bailey being a walking roofie. Why ruin this hot, sex positive story by making Bailey's cum a damn date rape drug? Totally lame and fucked up.

I think you should have gone more into the forgetful bit. Natalie' s pussy was sore for that horse back ride, at the beginning of the story because the day before she had been brought to that secret spot and been fucked. Then forgot about it. Then gets brought there today again, gets fucked, and forgets about it, again. You should have ended the story with Bailey suggesting they go hang out at her "secret spot".

Pros: you write a good sex scene

Cons; you could be more origional with the scenario

The forgetfulness with the cum is unnecessary, the rest is hot.

This is steamy. I love it when fics include pregnancy risk.

Thought it was kind of hot at first but then the magic semen date rape spin and forced pregnancy is where you totally lost me. It was no longer hot and grossed me out the way it got rapey out of nowhere. Would've been much better without it.

This story was originally posted to the Fantasy/Sci-fi category, but I've moved it to the Mind Control category instead, to better reflect the content. Some readers were justifiably put off by the sudden and unexpected turn at the end, in a section of Literotica that doesn't typically deal with such subject matter. Hopefully that aspect will be more welcome for readers of the Mind Control category.

As always, thanks for all of the feedback, good and bad. It's appreciated.

If I have any readers left who liked the story aside from the ending, I've got other stories up as well, that I've TRIED to categorize properly. :)

This was pure sex, out and out!! What a fantastic story of mind control and lust so that both couldn't get enough!! Well done, let's see what happened after that time, "please'!

How do the other girls know to stay away from Bailey if her cum makes them forget ever having sex with her? Look, the mind control/memory erasing aspect of the story isn't my favorite, but the story still works well enough for me that I still enjoyed it. But if you're going to have magical memory erasing semen, then it should at least work.....

Will their be more to this