by Sunshine615
these two are going to be explosive i think, make that i hope, and why do i think grampa is playing match maker by just throwing them together
Good start... I can already see the fire between the two of them. However, some of the grammatical/spelling errors made it a little difficult to read. You may want to get an editor for the next chapters. Can't wait to see where you take these characters and what happens next :-) Who doesn't love an good ole country romance?!?!
Love it so far but it's still a little short. Just when things were starting to get good and you can get into it, it ends....hope there's more to come soon and hopefully a little longer!
in a few years this stupid bitch could actually show her legs again in a dress. or did you mean this is not about a REAL farm, but a cute little petting zoo in NYC??? the writing is fine, but daisy dukes on ANY farm. nope unless you want a 1000 scratches and cuts. look at my arms i'm a farmer that hates long sleeve shirts...is this a ho story?