All Comments on 'Country Store Ch. 04'
by teachgirl1980
- 9 Comments
JDLYTLE1almost 17 years agoi love your discriptions, but this one took forever, with no peak...look forward to the next chapter
thanks for writing.
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoThis story was written in a manner that elicited arousal all the while displaying a sense of style and sagacious wit. I am not surprised to see that the author is an English teacher, for she possesses a skill that palpably surpasses that of the average writer to this site. Keep up the great work and we, your fans, will continue reading! (See, let this be an example to everyone: When you remain in school, you learn to write like this lady; when you dropout, you spend all day asking, "Excuse me, sir -- do you want fries with that?")
Anonymousalmost 17 years agogood story. no beating around the issues just right to it. It was arousing and cool...loved it much!!
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoc'mon gal cont....wid da story...........1ce u ve started complete.......
1 point i wud lyk 2 suggest tht da chickz r damn bitchy....cant dey b a bit mor sexy..2...............neways its ur story....
guud work...
smidgeonover 16 years agoI'm loving the slow build! Yes, it was a fast, delicious start, but I was a bit worried about her as I felt her despair and wasn't sure where this would end up. Now with Ken back in the picture as a good guy, I'm hopeful for Kim again. We're seeing more of her strength, resolve and confidence emerge, and even Ken's better qualities are present again. Please continue!
Elusive_Mindover 16 years agoI've enjoyed all of your stories. Don't leave us hanging too long on the "country store" series.
I wish I had more time to spend writing but my real job never seems to end.
Good luck.
EM
RossDanielsover 16 years ago. . . with a slow, tantalizing build up. Can't wait to see what comes next.
wizarddriverover 16 years agoA slow build up is always best, makes the climax all the more enjoyable & spunky.
Loved it, keep up the excellent writing Love Wizarddriver
Anonymousover 6 years agoI’m liking the story, but am a little concerned that the girl is being a passive victim. She is not assertive in any way. She seems totally submissive to her little “tingles.” Titillating but not realistic.
Great structure in your stories though. Second series I have read.
