All Comments on 'Coworkers' Dalliance'

For a romance story, this was not only short but also so completely emotionally detached that it for like nothing! Or was bland and clinically cold! Try adding some personality to the writing!

I find this tale lacking feelings. what company would get one room and

only one bed for two coworkers? really , a hand in his pants , moaning at the

table. make it sound real.