All Comments on 'Criminal Affair Pt. 02'

Really tight concise writing. I would have sworn I’d read

3-4 pages by the end. Fantastic writing!!

Thanks

Ed

Yeah, I found this today. Great writing. The dialogue is very well done. Gonna be a late night for me.

Not as good as Chapter 1 in my opinion, but still 5 stars! I'm enjoying this! ~~ JBE

I was intrigued by Part 1, but reeled in by Part 2 (and I usually have to watch 3 parts of a Netflix series before I'm sure I like it enough to watch the rest). Well written, good dialogue, and a premise I haven't seen before ... well done!

I don't usually comment on multi-part stories until the end. I feel it's like judging a meal by the first course.

Occurrences of lines such as "I go to bar away from work and I throw out my lures." could be avoided through the use of a grammar checker application or website. They would find the missing word(s) for you.

Good chapter!

5

Kind of hard to believe a cum slut like the Sgt. can keep her priorities straight and not get caught, or get the clap or some other STD with the way she just jumps from dick to dick. Nice for a fictional fuck story, but hard to believe that it could remain hidden.

Definitely getting better, enjoying the mix of detective story and sex story

As soon as I realised Jill and Derek were both characters from your other series I was hooked. The way you introduced them this time was clever. I’m already certain this will be another great read.

Thanks

*****Good read. Thanks for sharing.