All Comments on 'Criminal Affair Pt. 03'

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tangledweed about 6 years ago

Concise writing.

No wasted words here, just enough to convey what is going on and her thoughts/emotions. It's a minimalist style that reminds me of Elmore Leonard/Raymond Chandler writing or Guy Clark songwriting. That is a good thing and is very effective.

lastman416 about 6 years ago

Excellent

I also like your concise writing style, and I’m interested in where the story is going.

teedeedub almost 6 years ago

That's pretty

much true about small towns. Good story. Hope there's more, but........

Anonymousover 4 years ago

Superb

Great writing.

oldpantythief over 1 year ago

After the last chapter, this one is much better, some actual police work and character building, not just the fuck and suck.

Obsessedanal 5 months ago

Loving this series 🔥 From a small town in Missouri 💦💦

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