by CaffeineFetish
After the last chapter, this one is much better, some actual police work and character building, not just the fuck and suck.
much true about small towns. Good story. Hope there's more, but........
I also like your concise writing style, and I’m interested in where the story is going.
No wasted words here, just enough to convey what is going on and her thoughts/emotions. It's a minimalist style that reminds me of Elmore Leonard/Raymond Chandler writing or Guy Clark songwriting. That is a good thing and is very effective.