All Comments on 'Crimson Moonlight Ch. 02'

Love this story :) and for your first time writing it I think you are doing a great job. So far I have no comments to make regarding your writing, it seems all good to me lol.

So I can not wait for the next chapter!! :)

I enjoyed the story. It still felt like such a tease to get the little bit of background. I'd of course love to know what went on with Lady Kia, who was after her and why, what did she do with/to her and where she was for 2 years. I also hope you'll tell us how long ago it was that Langston found her. Was she asleep all that time? Was she 2 years older? Why does she belong to him? And what is the collar and why does he know she has to wear it? I really hope you tell us lots more. I am also wondering what campaign are they on? Where are they going? Looking forward to more.

cant wait to see wat will happen

i like. more of this and simliar