All Comments on 'Cruise Ship Pleasures'

by Hermun

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RealDocRealDocover 14 years ago
OK but

I really enjoy a little more intrigue. As is, it just doesnt have the sound of reality. A good first try. Keep writing.

NakedinNCNakedinNCover 14 years ago
Has Potential

Interesting set-up (the medical condition causing ED).

The young men coming on, and the wife's quickly agreeing, is not believable ... due to the quick agreement.

I wonder what would have happened if the husband found out about some sort of "mechanical" solution for his problem.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I loved it!

Nothing can be sexier than women like Cheryl. They are underappreciated. To have her enjoy such a wild sexual experience is one of my particular fantasies. And it is particularly sweet when the story ends with the loving couple together after her daring adventure.

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