All Comments on 'Cruise That Changed My Life Ch. 01'

by CuriousBeyondBelief

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

If he was just having a dream about sucking and fucking, he'll love doing it for real.

isadoreisadoreabout 9 years ago
more?

am looking forward to more of this story which is a favourite fantasy of mine-a cock whore on a gay cruise for all to use.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

If dreaming of it means he will love it, then I guess I will be a cock whore. I have had dreams like that after I had a cock in my face. I definitely want more. This makes me want to be taken from both ends.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

i have the same type of fantasy. run with it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
2 stars (if stars were available)

Didn't much care for this. Premise was lame. Character was non-dimensional. Writing was awkward with sloppy grammar and punctuation. And I'm so tired of the dom/bully aspect that clueless straights try to impose on gay relationships.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Very well written.

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