All Comments on 'Crystal'

by Cole Calder

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Some fantasy

Even fantasy has some reality to it and this story has obviously lost touch with it.

dsidedsideabout 20 years ago
This is a bullshit story.

Why not try for some believability the next time or better yet stick with your high school stories. How old are you, that you don't know how adults act?

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Anothet

Another author trying to write a cute story and failing badly.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

At least the husband fucked a woman this time. LOVED IT!!!!

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