All Comments on 'Crystal Ch. 03'

But I like it! Interesting take on comic book heroes.

You don't have to worry about topping yourself, in length or pizzazz. You're great at writing the sex you want in your stories, and this chapter highlights some nice plot additions. Keep up the good work(s) and you'll be more than fine DM

An interesting take on the comic book setting. Good sex moments and the possiblity for a large expansion to the plot.

My main problem with it is that the sex (so far) has always be between 2/3 humans (superpowers or not). i would personally put it in the Sci-fi/Fantasy category

English is not my first language so dont judge my spelling please.

Not bad of a narration of sex coming from a teenage virgin.

Loving the story sex is great too don't listen to the haters they just jealous

Thank you for this story. I like the fact that you are mixing two of my favorites, that being Super Heroes and villains along with sex. I am seeing a good story line developing as well.