All Comments on 'Crystal Ch. 08'

I'm just glad that you made it to where Max and Crystal got back together. Also I it was funny as hell with the way Cole ended up in the end.

Max came back just in time to keep me reading, you dont need to up the sex as I think you already have a good balance between sex and story.

Love reading can't wait for the next installment my

Hey man, just wanted to say I really like this story, it’s very good. Maybe the best thing I’ve read here.

it was so fuckin funny how the cole crystal relationship finished. i almost feel sorry for that guy