by DarkMatter23
it was so fuckin funny how the cole crystal relationship finished. i almost feel sorry for that guy
Hey man, just wanted to say I really like this story, it’s very good. Maybe the best thing I’ve read here.
Max came back just in time to keep me reading, you dont need to up the sex as I think you already have a good balance between sex and story.
I'm just glad that you made it to where Max and Crystal got back together. Also I it was funny as hell with the way Cole ended up in the end.