by CrackedChaos
All we need now is the as***le to come face to face with Holden. We do not like so called men who harm any female. He needs a short shrift look at life for what he did to Kennedy. Keep up with this brill story, can't wait for next ch. Give it another 5*
This chapter felt like a rushed decision to make the fiancé a terrible person instead of just boring so Kennedy wouldn't seem like such a bitch for entertaining another guy while in a relationship. And of course, Lara is annoying as hell, as usual. Their "friendship" and I use that term VERY loosely, is fake and shouldn't exist. Her sole purpose is to dissuade Kennedy from sticking with her fiancé and that's unnecessary. She could come to that conclusion on her own.
Of course, this might just be the writer in me, but a huge part of me doesn't care for the way this chapter went. At all.