All Comments on 'Cum, Cumming, Came'

The flow of this story felt as if I was being carried down a rushing mountain river. Almost too fast, but covering great swaths of beautiful scenery. I would love for your next stories to fill in with great detail, the actions, feelings and emotions of your characters throughout this story. I would love for you to develop these characters prior to their meeting and as the relationship evolved. Please keep writing. 5*