All Comments on 'Custodians'

weird but a pretty good story. ready to read some more.

The grammar issues were a bit distracting, but the amount of the story left to the imagination is a near-perfect Balance between it being non-descriptive and defined.

Your choice words were exquisite and measured, with each movement from one thing happening to another being equally so. Honestly, you have given me a good bit to learn on writing not for distance, but for detail.