by FastEddie26
Unless he gets ass raped by his dad or gets involved
with his mother or sister. Where is this going?
A bit to short for a beginning...
I don't see the incest or the taboo at all. I'll give this one more chapter to see where this is going.
i think your initial chapter is just fine. I'm interested to see the mentoring part develop.
I imagine you'll once more not finish a story. I actually like this premise so far - the dad being a mentor. Not really incest, but this is far preferable and much hotter.
However, looks to me like you aren't going to continue.
I like the story very much. One of my favorite themes is that of a boy or young man learning how to fuck from watching his dad do it, whether with or without his father's knowledge.