All Comments on 'Dad, My Reluctant Mentor Ch. 01'

by FastEddie26

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MrLurkerMrLurkeralmost 13 years ago

Unless he gets ass raped by his dad or gets involved

with his mother or sister. Where is this going?

A bit to short for a beginning...

Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptalmost 13 years ago
I must agree.

I don't see the incest or the taboo at all. I'll give this one more chapter to see where this is going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
just fine

i think your initial chapter is just fine. I'm interested to see the mentoring part develop.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
The rest?

I imagine you'll once more not finish a story. I actually like this premise so far - the dad being a mentor. Not really incest, but this is far preferable and much hotter.

However, looks to me like you aren't going to continue.

FrivolousFrivolousabout 6 years ago
Good, dirty.

I like the story very much. One of my favorite themes is that of a boy or young man learning how to fuck from watching his dad do it, whether with or without his father's knowledge.

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