by FastEddie26
I like the story very much. One of my favorite themes is that of a boy or young man learning how to fuck from watching his dad do it, whether with or without his father's knowledge.
I imagine you'll once more not finish a story. I actually like this premise so far - the dad being a mentor. Not really incest, but this is far preferable and much hotter.
However, looks to me like you aren't going to continue.
i think your initial chapter is just fine. I'm interested to see the mentoring part develop.
I don't see the incest or the taboo at all. I'll give this one more chapter to see where this is going.
Unless he gets ass raped by his dad or gets involved
with his mother or sister. Where is this going?
A bit to short for a beginning...