All Comments on 'Daddy?'

Good start but too short.

Good first story. Let your imagination fly and write.

I pray a woman did not write this. 2018 what vinrator plugs in and and is so loud you can hear it in another room? What does flicking your clit and soothingly rubbing have to do with rough sex? At least read your own story before posting to fix some basic mistakes. Keep working at it and it could be great. I love the idea of the dad watching

been a lot better and like the other poster said what vibrator plugs in anymore? also too short and didn't finish the story, could have been very hot

but don't leave me hanging here with a stiff cock in my hand please keep posting thanks

i love my plug in's. they stay strong, unlike the battery ones.

Good story, but, please keep writing. longer stories.

Just enough story so that you know the characters and what is going to happen. I thought you had done a good job. I enjoyed it, well done. 5 stars.

I loved thks just enough story to set the scene. Nothing else needed 5 stars.