All Comments on 'Daddy, I'm Home'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

And to the point

RapidResponderRapidResponderover 8 years ago
Average

Not great but not bad, either. ***

horny7incherhorny7incherover 8 years ago
More please

Great story. Love there to be a part two to this story. very well written.

pamelaz2004pamelaz2004over 8 years ago
mmmmm

I wish I could get my daddy to fuck me.

TigersmanTigersmanover 8 years ago

Good story. Short but sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

A few failed marriages?!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Too short

Good story but needed to spread it out a bit. Straight into fucking after 10 years apart seems unlikely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Get some better help on the next one Your write.

This story was way to short and after 10 years away from Her Daddy she just jumps Him the sec she sees him. Come on give us a break. You sure need help with Your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Meeh

A bit short, some mistakes in spelling, and the 10 year thing was dumb

6/10

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
She needs

To be punished. Ten years. Spank her until her ass is red and she realizes what she has missed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Noooooo

So short. Please write more. I would love it if this was extended and their new romantic relationship was explored more. Does he regret not loving her how she needed, forcing her to seek out love elsewhere, only to fail time and time again because they could never be him?

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