All Comments on 'Daddy Takes To Tennis'

You need a course in writing, and learn other words besides cunt.

Story was meh. Rubbish has two 'b's, since someone mentioned spelling.

i gave up reading this story, quotation marks needed when speech is represented, spelling needs some work to

Try not to repeat things so much and if you want them to be represented as high-end, classy people, you shouldn't have them say things like "piss" "spunk" "cunt", the language is really dirty compared to their personalities. Other than that, nice.

The end of this story just made it ridicolous. Wasting my time on another stupid hopeless story... Don't even know why I did bother with this comment......