All Comments on 'Daddy's Bad Girl'

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SamWarrensSamWarrensabout 6 years ago
Must have chapter 2

Chapter 2 where he fucks her bareback and cums in her several times - of course she eventually becomes pregnant.

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxabout 6 years ago
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm:

PART2 - - - - - - father's sister suddenly dies after major accident along with

her husband ... their daughter\their twin~daughters : now need place stay

that's local because she\because they recently did get excepted around college

that's local ... she\they even more crazy than Julia ... some point down line

after everything becomes situated she\they literally catch father\daughter ...

she\they now immediately hatch own plan seduce Julia bedding Julia ...

some point down line possibly PART3 the father does catch them two\them three

KazuyaKazuyaabout 6 years ago

Pretty good short story keep going and keep the chapters short

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
So far seems good start

Would like to see some anal play before he fucks her raw

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
So-So

"red pantie she was wearing today"

More, too, but that's all I could be bothered pasting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wtf

He grabbed her pea and pulled as hard as he could??? Lol no, no no no. It was alright until then. Weird and awkward.

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