All Comments on 'Daddy's Bedroom'

We have shared a bed, and our bodies, for many years.

By all means, continue writing!!!!!!!

Another jerk-off story, no plot,and no background just get in bed and fuck.

But I suggest you get an editor or at least someone to proofread the stories for you.

this is a free writing forum so as such will divide opinion,these are fantasies to promote desire,and not a political session in the backbenches in london haha

i enjoyed very much!

This story really needed a reasonable prelude, where Scarlet develops strong emotional bonds with her dad, and over time where he responds by letting her sleep in his bed, and in time buys her the sexy sleep-ware that she displays at the start of this story. There would then be some basis for her seducing her dad into first making her cum with his tongue, and then letting her eat his big cock, before ultimately allowing him to fuck her good and proper. Only then could the story evolve into a continuing tale of the consequences of their inter-breeding, and the full development of their long-term relationship.