All Comments on 'Daddy's Birthday Gift Pt. 03'

by sweetnthicklady

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chERe7heQacUchERe7heQacUover 7 years ago
Hot!!

What a wonderful birthday story! Looking for the next chapter SOON!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Spell check / editor needed

Story is hot enough in its own way, but the grammar and punctuation are a bit distracting

I don't recall reading in the initial setup if mom was still around, or if siblings are involved - that's always an interesting layer of dynamics to explore

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