All Comments on 'Daddy's New Girl Pt. 03'

by kinkerbella

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Tugit77Tugit77almost 8 years ago
FANTASTIC

Hoping for more. Enjoyed the series very much was so happy to see the third part pop up after I had literally just finished the second one

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Fantasy

Truly erotic fantasy. Thanks for sharing your vivid imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Kinkerbella

I can see, feel and appreciate the effort you have put into this series. I'm not a sadist or masochist, so it's difficult for me to connect to the story. I feel like an unwilling voyeur wondering what is going on and why. One excellent thing is how you worked the issue of consent into the story. Each time it added to the story and didn't detract. Other authors could learn from that. I'm confused as to why you have titled this as a daddy story. It doesn't have a daddy feel. The set up you've given Meg and the speed at which you have her moving is rather scary. She's on a straight line to psycho bitch with bodies in the back yard, not just powerful sadist domme. Don't lose her humanity in the rush for her to sate her ennui. (The bloodthirsty crowd will probably disagree and list countless evil things for Meg to do.)

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