All Comments on 'Daisy finds Mr. Right Now'

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cali_fraecali_fraeabout 7 years ago
More please, but...

Would've been easier to read if the dialogue wasn't mixed in with Daisy's internal monologue/narration.

I liked Daisy, she knows who she is, seems to have her head screwed on & so has found acceptance in the world. The way she is & see's things is refreshing & hopefully we'll hear more about her. The only part of the story i had trouble believing was that Eric took his medical documents with him on a 1st date, as Daisy didn't mention her concern to him it seems very presumptuous to bring them along & show them to her.

mumblegooseeggmumblegooseeggover 6 years ago
I like this series

I got very horny reading this piece and I don't quite know why, but I loved it!

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NOTE: read these three stories in this order; 1st - You Can't Deny Your Wolf. 2nd - The Beautiful Young Alpha. 3rd - The Chosen One. ~ I try to write easy to read stories with sexual content containing characters who have fluid sexuality. They contain obscure references, q...