All Comments on 'Dameon Claims His Birthright'

he's just a little too cruel for me, or maybe its the spoiled brat syndrome that makes him seem overly heartless. Forcing them back into their rightful places as slaves is one thing, but why put up with the free lady act if he have them naked, crawling, playing fetch, abuse, and rape in the house behind closed doors. Apparently he cares nothing for them, there no love or even appeciation for the love and hopefully kindness his step mother gave him after his own mother's death. Maybe a little back story of his childhood with her and his sister may help in understand his rage and loveless way he feels for them. Society can't make him that heartless....specially when his father was so good to all of them. I do know...some background would help. Again, this is a great chapter and I will be looking forward to the other installments. Good luck and thank you for sharing. Kisses

it was to short but i would very much enjoy to see how it continue

I love this story and hope you continue to add more chapters.

Great premise. This story was darn good. However you need better detail in your sex scenes. Instead of just saying he pumps until he cuts go into detail. That would really make it great. Write more.

Good start to a story. It should be fun to see where it goes. I am hoping that he is just upset at losing his birthright and took it out on them. That he isn't cruel. It sounds like his father did care for her so it would be nice to see him care also.

Just a random thought but how does his father go and get his will changed to include her but not get the set free paperwork done at the same time? Minor issue.

You said more if it was asked for. Well I am asking for more. And I am sure others would like more. considering the time frame he should be Impregnating Step Mommy! to her shame and Arousal.

Thank you. My cunt is aching