by Mister_Eff
You write women well. And you made me late for work with this one.
Fucking should be fleshy and wet, great stuff. A woman with meat on her bones who loves it up the ass is a joy. In the future please proofread for grammar, and describing her panties getting peeled off is a real turn on. Keep writing, it has the makings of great stuff.
loved it. everything about it. had to add to my faves to read later. really appreciated the humor and the realness. but it was still hot.
please check out my stories and leave some feedback if you have time. i'd love to know what you think.
Sometimes, simple is best, and I think you capture a nice moment here.
Great, self-contained story. Could be any good city on half the planet, within the last 20 years.
Yes I said it, everyone knows a Dana. If you're lucky you are her. Able to own your sexually and just go for it. Well done. Looking forward to the next installment.
Really enjoyed the honesty and humor in this story... it was sexy and funny. Great work. Hope you write further installments your adventures with Dana!