All Comments on 'Dance for Me'

by RedhairedSub25

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

I don't like Dante.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
The problem with this mess?

Was she (or anyone for that matter) that dumb? I just can't find anything interesting about this when she behaved in such a clueless manner.

1 star.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Face Slapping

Is a turn-off. Otherwise everything else is hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Really enjoyable

I really enjoyed this story, especially the sensual dancing on stage.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
good example

This is a great example of a good dom. A good dom is rough when needed but still caring. Then when it's all over he/she is gentle. Because a dom who's a hard ass all the time is just an ass with a title.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
description and control

Great job on describing Chloe's desire and torment. Love it when complete mental and physical control is given.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Worst.Book.Ever

this was gross i practically dozed off while reading! ONE STAR FUCKING MESS

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Didn't care for the face slapping at all. I know that would have ended it for me. I don't care who, but to me that would stop my submission. My trust would gone like that. Take that out and keep the rest.

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