All Comments on 'Dancing in the Dark: A Family Tale'

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tuvoktuvokover 18 years ago
Awesome!!!!

What a story it was great I could well believe this story to be true I wish I had a family like them.

RyeandGingerAyleRyeandGingerAylealmost 11 years ago
SUCH a good story!

Makes me want to 5-star and favourite it every time I read it. Wonderful fantasy.

olblueyesolblueyesabout 6 years ago

wait,, i don't understand,, very hot sex between parents and their children and then the kids go to bed w/o a discussion about what hadjust occured? takes away some of the intimacy of the story,,otherwise very good.

x_pac6969x_pac6969about 5 years ago
Hot Story

Great start. Cant wait till the next instalment

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Another thing

The dad reminds me of a client I once had. He's done about five years in the slam and has a little over 20 to go. He deserved it but his wife and daughter didn't.

ToughSailorToughSailor4 months ago

Hey! This was supposed to be about them fucking the kids. So how come they suddenly just up and went to bed? There had better a follow-up chapter . . . .

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