All Comments on 'Dangerous Longings'

i liked it, but i have to point out one thing- the entirety of the backstory is not immediately needed. all we need is what is relevant to the story. if it's meant to be erotica, then get to the erotic parts, don't tell us about his entire life. i wish you would do more, and i'm sorry i'm the first to say that. *hugs*

I really enjoyed your story.