All Comments on 'Danica Pt. 08'

loved the story and the hook ups, got to see whats next!!!!!

This is superb! I usually stick to the smaller stories, but I have been sucked into this one and I can't get enough. I think that this story in its entirety is the length of a novel! That is astounding. I also noticed how you have proclaimed yourself a Master Mage of world-wide renown in the text. Well deserved, I think. This is an extremely well crafted story, and I cannot wait to finish it.

Congratulations!

This chapter has elements of bias against men calling them mindless oafs who think with their dicks.As an man its pretty offensive .I don't know if I should read forward

I was following this story from chapters one to now but I dint know now if I should

This is denegerative to men while I am totally respectful of women having grown up among strong women I am for gender equality I am huge fan of the sword and sorcery genre and more so if it is in the erotica genre but I guess this chapter put me off

I do appreciate the genre and plot of the story and the detailed spell part and I shall continue to read .I just hope Danica squares off against a formidable female opponent.We haven't seen her tested so far against anyone apart from the primary antagonist

Loving the story.

Trying to resist the enchantment so that I can stop reading and get to bed almost early tonight.

I was surprised that you had not had Danica already realise from Brandon’s interactions with her that he was a decent man under his crude exterior, as you’d already given me that impression.