All Comments on 'Dark Alley Hardcore Strap-on Femdom'

Uber bitch femdoms shouldn't giggle. It really breaks character. ;)

Thanks for putting this in appropriately in noncon and not bdsm. Too many are confusing them lately.

Are you planning to just leave the poor guy there?

Your desire comes thru in the story. Be patient and look for opportunity. An older woman may be able to help you achieve your goal

In need of editing.

Great. Don’t be in a rush to turn it in. Spelling mistakes drive the reader crazy. The story does not flow naturally. Do you have any idea how costly lady’s shoes are? And you are just going to leave them on him? How long it takes to put on nail polish and dry that stuff? You need a plot with a plausible story. Guy, bar, location with booze like a wedding, drunk or drugs, his help in moving to a different location, preplaned isolated spot. His office? Three day weekend? He fucked over your people so you are going to fuck him up. Leave him tied, bent over a conference table? His desk so he has a daily reminder? Ladies find him first. Pictures are taken or video sent to people in offices. You can do better.