All Comments on 'Dark Desire Ch. 01'

... carry on with it :-)

I also like the shift of perspective. Adds a little variance to the story without interrupting it! Good job!

Keep it up ))

Can't wait for more :)

Please more. Don't leave us hanging at this point.

This was a very HOT chapter. The way the King toys with Celeste builds sexual tension with the reader. However, I really hope you return to write more parts so that we can finally see that tension released and the King fucks her brains out.

Very sexy teasing in this chapter. Please, continue this! And I would love to eventually see Celeste be "rewarded" by Alexander with some stunningly amazing sex, though I hope she stays loyal to Brian in the long run.