All Comments on 'Dark Serenity Ch. 05'

a few minor editing goofs but otherwise it was really great.

I liked the flashback when Sage and Liz met. I wonder who will win her heart because Sage doesn't seem like the kind of demon that gives up easily.

Don't keep us waiting too long the ch 6.

Good to see this chapter posted. I enjoyed reading how Sage and Eliza met.

I really liked this story; however, I really wish it could be finished. Surely this is not the end?

Please update