All Comments on 'Dark Whispers'

by desertkat

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RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyalmost 18 years ago
Thanks

Your story has been mentioned on the New Story Review thread found on Lit.'s bulletin board under the Author's Hangout forum. Thanks for the read. ~ Red

peggytwittypeggytwittyalmost 18 years ago
This is consensual BDSM playing, but good

Good BDSM play acting that could lead to a trained slave master relationship if allowed to grow.

Pretty good writing and story

Alvaron53Alvaron53almost 18 years ago
Excellent and enjoyable

Good portrayal of their dark sides, particularly her contrasting desire to be righteous. Well told and very erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
(Just a horny sluts comment)

This was so hot I wish someone would fuck me and hit me like this

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