by desertkat
This was so hot I wish someone would fuck me and hit me like this
Good portrayal of their dark sides, particularly her contrasting desire to be righteous. Well told and very erotic.
Good BDSM play acting that could lead to a trained slave master relationship if allowed to grow.
Pretty good writing and story
Your story has been mentioned on the New Story Review thread found on Lit.'s bulletin board under the Author's Hangout forum. Thanks for the read. ~ Red