All Comments on 'Darlene, It's Not What You Think'

So why bother with any back story??? Because it served nothing. You could have accomplished the same thing with:

"There was a girl in a house with a guy. She went to the bathroom and he raped her. The end."

Needs a lot of work before it qualifies as even a one-star story. I give it 1/2 of 5. Lame.

I enjoyed the story and I especially liked the backstory and the build up. It does need a little editing. Good story. Keep it up!

Bery well done erotic story, great pace and flow, got to the sex quickly, without too much or too little backstory foreplay, addressed the theme consistently with the no consent fantasy that "even if she didn't want it, she enjoyed it, so it's ok."

as she stood there////drip---drip----drip.....wont stop. TK U MLJ LV NV