All Comments on 'Dating Dixie'

Beautiful story. I hope that people won't mess with you regarding 'edigor' er 'editor'. Truely it was my pleasure to read. Sad that I'm the only one to comment on this wonderful story. thank you for sharing your story.

a story of yours has kept me totally involved all the way through.The guy was so laid back that he was almost unbelievable,and as for Dixie,she was totally and completely female(God bless 'em all).Your stories always contain just the right ammount of humor.Once again thanks for a great read.

...but from an erotic or romantic standpoint, utterly, mind-numbingly boring.

Couldn't get passed the incest and really unpleasant male main character. Sorry.

Technically well written? Bwahahaha! His spellcheck works OK. But, his punctuation is abysmal, and his word choice/usage is strictly ESL.

Palmer performed FELLATIO on Aunt Phyllis.(Not unless she is a PREsurgery trans woman)

When he finished fucking her (not unless she is a POSTsurgery trans), he BLURTED. When one interjects oneself into a conversation, one can be said to blurt or ejaculate. When it shoots out of your dick, it's not blurting. (these 2 in just the first few paragraphs)

He smiled PHILOSOPHICALLY. WTF does that mean?

Bio says he is a retired journalist, but it sure as hell wasn't in English (or it was a very short career).

4 comments (5 now) out of 21313 views with only 6 favorites (<1 in 3500) is really lousy. My 1-bomb dropped the score .01. Not many readers finished/voted on this literary abortion.