All Comments on 'Dating Lindsey Ch. 02'

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petjennypetjennyabout 12 years ago
so much fun

I'm absolutely loving ths story. It's so much fun. My, my, I'm sure poor Lindsey has no idea how much discomfort he is in ...hee hee.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Can't wait

for the weekend! Looking forward to meeting Lindsey's aunt ... Lindsey, her Mom, and her aunt, that should make for a glorious party! :)

Quixotic1Quixotic1about 12 years ago
Wow! Boiling Hot! More Please!

This story is on it's way to pushing all of my buttons, especially if the future holds him being taught how to properly care for and pleasure a woman while remaining in chastity! It appears that he is also going to need some punishment/discipline for his pushiness! Great writing, thanks for sharing!

Feral_IntelligenceFeral_Intelligenceover 11 years ago
Almost there

So far not a bad story. It certainly does a good job of teasing to the build up. Lindsey's naivete raised an eyebrow. While I could buy her not wanting him to masturbate, thinking its icky just prickled at me. I do hope that we see a conclusion to this tale. Its been a good build up, but to me it doesn't really climax if there is no release.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
what the every loving fuck.....

I'm female and my balls are hurting. Suspension of disbelief gets difficult when characters are this psycho (mom and daughter) and this wimpy (dude). And what the hell with the friend setting him up for this and then shrugging it off....Guess there is something to your story if it works forks up enough to comment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Hope you stop writing

Because this just isn't plausible or well written or original in the least.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good story

Another chapter would be great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
loved it!

I wish you'd continue this amazing story!

goodslave4ugoodslave4uabout 6 hours ago

LOVE the story.... but poor Lindsey didn't get to cum???? I mean honestly, he is supposed to be this nice guy.... but he couldn't give her oral sex??? the jerk is getting her all worked up and NOTHING for her???? the guys a jerk... he didn't even offer??? is he going to make her beg???

Christ all he does is think about his blue balls.... what about caring for his nice girlfriend and wanting to make her happy???? he deserves to be blue balled.... if he let her cum a few times .... say every night before she goes to bed she would be more relaxed at school and happier and content..... and if she was happy.... she might fall in love with him and try to get the mother to unlock him.... or at least try to lick his balls to maybe make them more comfortable.... even tickling them with a feather would help him... but why should she???? if he doesn't want to make her cum... hell he should be kissing her ass!!!! she has been so sweet to him.... kissing her ass for an hour while she watches her favorite tv show would at least show her that he cares about her pleasure and he doesn't just think about his swollen balls

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