All Comments on 'Daughter's Desires Ch. 02'

WHY DID YOU HAVE TO BRING JILL INTO THE PICTURE AT THE END ? IT IS SO GOOD WHEN IT IS PRIVATE BETWEEN TWO PEOPLE , IT IS MORE CREDIBLE .

Daddy this and daddy that. kinda corny but lots of sex...

Well now hot little Jill is back perhaps you can have a threesome?

leave jill out- what a terrible end to a great $tory.

hmm...great read. Loved it even with Jill at the end, but would have loved it more if they would have kicked her out. When can expect more?

-scotchbound (sandd_bound)

Steaming hot- wonderful details

Bringing Jill back into the story doesn't subtract from it's credibilty, it adds to it. Very well written and very believable.

hopefully the next installments will be as good!!

congrats.

Now the story's gone from virgin who's only ever had her "pussy mound rubbed through [her] jeans" to vaginal intercourse with her father to anal intercourse the second day. Where's the build-up?

Do like this daughter and her father being discovered by Jill at the end of Ch. 2. Hmmm... wonder what my opinion will be after Ch. 3

Hehehe, well I guess one way or the other, she's got her daddy now! ...now will things blow up, or congeal and meld together? ;)

Great writing!