All Comments on 'Dave's Perfect Housemaid'

Seeing the author's name I knew it would be good, but instead it was great.

Please keep the chapters cumming !

Tom, in Oregon, USA

Especially the way-out, yet real, humour.

I think this could become a great series!!!!!!

The story was pretty good until the condom was mentioned. I don't know why in these fantasy stories why condoms have to be used. Eroticism seems to be a high note in them and things are not very erotic if cum ends up in a rubber nipple.

Great, entertaining, and true

Very good story and the writing is fantastic. I like the way you change your dialogue as it does flow. This story is filled with some great dialogue and it was quite a good pace.<p>I do not believe I have read your works before but I am now off to read some of your other submissions.<p>Thank you for the good entertainment.<p>PT

I hoped that this would be the first of a series because it really is quite original and very charming.

Good on ya!

Please keep 'em coming our way!

To get personality/characterology, humor, in such a short piece is

amazing. I can criticize nothing except I had the feeling I was out of

shape (I am more than usual) as I found myself almost out of breathe at the end.

The pace was entirely appropriate and getting all the aforementioned depth in simultaneously made me tired just to imagine the work. I hope the writer keeps the sex at this level of interest/variety and allows him or herself the opportunity to expand the people and the excellent basis for relationship growth - with the light but attached or involved touch, this is really good reading.