All Comments on 'David and John'

Your way with words makes the stories you tell jump out of the page and seem sooooo real. Im sure that many guys have had similar experiences and relate to these positively

Great start. Can't wait for more

Roll on chapter twq.

....left it a bit wide open there sport...don't be a tease....do finish the story.

I can take pictures also!! Good story!!

fucking brilliant story telling

really enjoyed this story a soft beginning but promises much more. well written too

What a nice opening. How our imaginations lead the way, showing us where desire might take us

Great introduction there. Makes me want more.

Nice. Any genre should include an easing into the situation. Without seduction, the stories are replete with ohs..and ahs…and nothing more. Cant wait to read more!