All Comments on 'Deadly Bridges Ch. 01'

Ok, in paragraph 2, someone's parents' died. You wrote "Debbie's" but then in paragraph 3 mention her Mother, Carolyn.

Is it me, or is that confusing?

Sorry, this is a typo- will be corrected- Carolyn's parents died.

Instead of the standard mom cheated and left, mom died through natural causes or mom was a bitch and dad somehow manages to free himself from her evil clutches, this man just simply murders his wife, no qualms whatsoever so he can fuck his daughter. Cold hearted dude, guess the pussy was worth it. Reminds me of a racier version of some old Lifetime movie for women I saw back in the day. Now a perfect ending would be if his daughter somehow got killed in some horrible accident (sad irony) OR better yet HE did. A just ending for a man with no soul! Thanks for the entertainment.

Thanks for this comment- I think it will all pan out well in the end. Wait for parts 2 and 3

I haven't even finished a few paragraphs, when I'm like Daddy's name is Dallas and his daughter Debbie, probably one of the 1st point movies I saw- Debbie does Dallas - story I'll go finish reading, just thought that was funny...

Nice start. Point of fact; there is no such aphrodisiac as Spanish fly. Also, appreciate the droll nudge towards Debbie does Dallas . . .