All Comments on 'Dear Diary'

My only problem here was the Diary thing.

Never having been interested in leaving the fun in my life written out for others to find stems from high school. A girl named Jane was into writing in her diary and used the capital letter "F" wit a short we to denote her experiences in back seats and beds. Mommy found it and a hell storm was let lose. Lets say Jane was indiscriminate and ahead of her peers.

No diary for me.

The break in narration and going over things we had already been over killed the story for me.

Your story would have been great except for you constantly imputing your snide political remarks. I don't give a fuck if you voted for "her' or not, the bitch lost so get over it.

religious chip on your shoulder?

I enjoyed that immensely! Great story!