All Comments on 'Dear Diary'

by JBEdwards

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writerjabwriterjabover 5 years ago

I enjoyed that immensely! Great story!

morrison44morrison44almost 6 years ago
liberal politics ruined a decent story

religious chip on your shoulder?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Politics? Really?

Your story would have been great except for you constantly imputing your snide political remarks. I don't give a fuck if you voted for "her' or not, the bitch lost so get over it.

ShadowcatXShadowcatXabout 7 years ago

The break in narration and going over things we had already been over killed the story for me.

Danno_61455Danno_61455about 7 years ago
SHE BROKE FREE AND FOUND A LIFE

My only problem here was the Diary thing.

Never having been interested in leaving the fun in my life written out for others to find stems from high school. A girl named Jane was into writing in her diary and used the capital letter "F" wit a short we to denote her experiences in back seats and beds. Mommy found it and a hell storm was let lose. Lets say Jane was indiscriminate and ahead of her peers.

No diary for me.

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